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I've been up all night talking to you,
Disopeying my parents, and theirs simple rules.
We're talked for hours without end,
I ask if your tired, you say "It depends...".
You say you miss my touch and smile,
I say be patient, it's worth its while.
The clock somes around to four,
Your still trying to get somthing more.
You you've done somthing wronge,
I say I don't care, we're still strong.
You start to cry and say " It shouldn't be this way"
I tell you not to cry and whisper "My love will never fade"
There is a pause, and an awkward silence,
My whole life I hoped it would never get this quiet.
I begin to worry, than you whisper "I love you",
I smile and reply "I love you too".
I say i need to go very gently,
You say don't go, please.
I say " I sincerely wish I didn't have to",
You change the subject trying to get me confused.
I say I'm sorry, and I will call tomorrow ok,
You reply " But Tomorrow is forever away...".
©2008-2009 ~SewnSymphonies
:iconsewnsymphonies:

Author's Comments

Digging throught old piles of papers
I came across two decent poems I wrote a year ago...
Both about Hopeless Romantisism...
Untill recently really, I couldn't write about anything else...lol
ANYWAYS...
This is one of them...
Its ok, I didn't change much to perserve its authnicity
And YES I had to look up "Tomorrow"
Stupid Word...

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:icongweee:
i love how your poems are like stories...

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"A bale of hay would taste good if it had enough whip cream on it."
-Great Grandpa Lenard
:iconsewnsymphonies:
yeah that was one of my earlier styles that I sorta just refined
thanks!

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"I've never believed in the term "Unconditional Love." Because not only is it as ironic as a "Civil War", but as a utterly devastating. But, like a war, it is ultimately necessary, and for some odd reason, mean are addicted to it."

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